I wrote it in about 5 to 10 minutes, in a single stroke of genius. Will need to be edited and the imagery will need to be made more cohesive. Also, veneer isn't as poetic as I would like. Need to change that.
My sky
Tonight
Is lacquered veneer
Dust
Awash
Through celestial glare
Tongue tastes copper
With a jade bracelet
Pry from pallid arms
Swinging from Saturn's rings
Succumb
Become
Return to Earth, Spaceman
Our fool's traipsed
Over a knoll he
Can't see
Over
All my life
I've waited for this
And worn the mark
Too brazenly
See the viridian spin
So, rings of Saturn,
Pull me in
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